Unforgettable,
was the day I first saw you,
and went awestruck by the magic
that your eyes beheld. So elegant, so mystical.
"Did I fall in love at first sight?", I ask in retrospect.
A feeling too deep for me to understand,
to explain. But the feeling was,
Unforgettable.
Dear,
Your drop-dead-gorgeous looks,
make me fall short of breath, every time
your image flashes in my mind, portraying the zenith of beauty.
Your voice invariably makes me fall madly in love with you,
intoxicating, as your breath caresses my neck,
as we hug, hoping the warmth lasts
for eternity.
It's the
way you make me feel,
so special, so unique, so confident of myself,
that keeps the flame of our romance alive and delightfully bright.
I thank the stupid cupid earnestly for a perfect strike
through the heart of the girl of my dreams
as you pulled me close and hugged
me tight.
The farther
away from you I am,
the closer I feel to you at heart.
Time, relations and distances have tested our bond, our trust.
Intimidating though they were, our love survived them all.
Growing stronger through each passing day,
every hurting curse and all those
miles.
Affection,
love and care oozes through
every action of yours, and not just for me.
I love the way you call every one that's important to me, Yours.
I love the way you give such great attention to small details.
Don't worry if I don't say it out loud often,
but I thank you for it's me whom
you chose.
7 comments:
la la la la la la la.....
hum tumhe pyaar is kadar karte hain sanam........
the love continuous forever..increasing exponential each scond..
aaj din main dusri baar aansoon aaya, ........
Yahoo!!
I got it!!
mesmerisizing...afsoos yeh coincident nahin incidental tha
Awesome tha.....
Tum bina PJ maare kuch likh sakhte ho, yeh aabh pata chala :D
wow.....gr8....Sumptuous and voluble.
Even though i am not in any relationship, i felt a vicarious thrill going through your beautifully romantic poem. God bless your relationship and may this feeling remain forever
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Really nice one Nishu.Very mature.I wish there was more talk of platonic love in the poem,but then that's only a skeptic's view and you can choose to ignore it.Otherwise,very good.The last part of the poem reminded me of the song "Nothing else matters":-
'So close no matter how far
Couldnt be much more from the heart
Forever trusting who we are
And nothing else matters.'
All the best for your future.
Bhai aisa poem mat likha karo..I will fell in love with you once again..........
Wow!!! intoxicating,Enchanting ,Sumptuous ....Now here is a man in love....See how love can change a man...our PJ master is now a matured man.....
Hey Does any one noticed the starting letter of each para?? Have a look once again and you can understand why am I emphasizing .. ..Good to see you maturing up....am really happy for you....may your relationship continues for ever
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